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    THE SUBMARINE BRIDGE, - Manny paces the deck in circles around the Captain. The bosun watches the instrumentation.

     

          

      FLASH TO:

          

      THE BOMB'S CLOCK showing twenty minutes.

          

      BACK TO:

          

      CAPTAIN    

      Go down and get some sleep.     

      We'll call you when Guillermo    

      lets up.

          

      MANNY    

      Bosun, what's the weather topside?

          

      The BOSUN looks at the captain who nods an approval.

          

      BOSUN    

      Twenty one, point seven six miles     

      per hour. We're in the center of the     

      storm.

          

      MANNY    

      Get me up there right now.    

      I have a funny feeling in my gut.

          

      CAPTAIN     

      We can't do it, Goddamnit!.    

      It's the eye of the hurricane.    

      Within five minutes the winds will --

          

      MANNY    

      That's all I need.    

          

      THE FORT -

          

      Comandante Uno and a few men brave the wind and run towards a small seaplane beached on the island with it's engines revving. Commandante Uno looks back at David's cell window.

          

      COMANDANTE UNO    

      Stupid gringos, they'll never    

      understand.     

          

      MANNY AND A COUPLE OF OTHER SEAMEN -

          

      on a raft in the heavy seas that seem beyond human capability.

      SEAMAN   

      (yelling)

      You're going to kill us. Ramirez.

          

      Manny - green himself, glares at him, grunts and then hangs his head over the side.

          

      DAVID'S CELL -

          

      Above his sleeping body there are only minutes left.

          

     

      TOMMY'S BEDROOM –

      the shadowy figure of Tommy moves from his room and down the hall.

       

      THE CHRISTMAS TREE LIGHTS blink softly against the wall. Suddenly, Tommy turns on his battery - powered lantern and with Smudge at his side, he looks exactly like the "forties," Fisk ad, "It's time to retire." He moves into Jeanie's room. She stirs, then rises with a start.

          

      JEAN     

      Tommy! You startled me.

          

      She turns on a bedside lamp. There are tears in Tommys eyes.

          

      JEAN (cont'd)    

      What's wrong.

          

      TOMMY    

      I couldn't sleep. I'm scared.

          

      JEAN    

      Did you listen for the sandman to say     

      Ho Ho Ho, Tommy are you asleep?     

     

           TOMMY    

      I tried and tried. but all     

      I could hear were the fog horns and

           they sounded like Daddy, Manny, and     

      Santa Claus all talking at once.

          

      THE HALLS OF THE DUNGEON -

          

      where the wind whistles an un-godly SOUND and the sinister shadow of Manny moves ominously along the slimy block walls.

          

      DAVID IN HIS CELL –

          

      in a fetal position, staring at the weathered limestone blocks.

          

      THE BLOCKS -

          

      waver, then form the outline of a face, then waver again.    

         

      DAVID watches, then hits his head.     

         

      THE BLOCK SLOWLY TAKES ON THE FACE OF SHERRY

      SHERRY    

                (V.O,echoing)    

      Higher and higher into the sky so blue.

      The most wonderful thing a child can do.

          

      Sherry swings up and up with Tommy on her lap.

          

      THE IMAGE FADES

          

      DAVID   

      (husky)    

      NO, Please. Don't go.    

      Don't take Tommy, Oh God.     

      DON'T LEAVE.-

          

      THE CELL DOOR creaks open.

          

      MANNY O.S.    

      - Why should'nt I leave you.    

      You dumb sonna of a bitch.    

      You walked right into a .

          

      Manny sees the nuclear device and the clock.

          

      ONLY FIVE SECONDS REMAIN.

          

      MANNY    

      DAVY, what the hell have you done?     

          

      Carson motions Manny to come closer with his finger. His  catatonic stare goes through Manny, who freezes in fear.

          

      THE CLOCK COUNTS DOWN -- THREE -- TWO -- ONE -- ZERO

          

      MINUS ONE -- MINUS TWO -- MINUS THREE.

          

      DAVID'S LAUGHTER PEELS THROUGH THE ROOM.

     

      GOLDEN GATE PARK ON A CLOUDY DAY,

          

      where children play in the beautiful gardens and ride the  carousel. Tommy and a friend play with the latest radio controlled off road cars.

      FRIEND    

      What are you doing for Christmas, Tommy?

          

      TOMMY    

      I dunno. The usual, I guess.    

      You need to adjust your camber.

          

      As they race the cars a sad look comes over Tommy's face.

          

      FRIEND    

      I'm going to Hawaii with my mom    

      and dad.

          

      They both rises as the cars come closer to the finish line.   Several other children gather around and in the AD LIBBED excitement Tommy grasps his neck then falls forward with the control in his hand.

          

      FRIEND     

      What's wrong Tommy?     

     


      TOMMY    

      I'm all right but my neck burns.

         

      A group of children gather around Tommy's prone body. He struggles to get up.ヘ

     

      A MONTAGE OF SHOTS:

          

      THE UNION SQUARE AREA OF SAN FRANCISCO

          

      IN A DOCTOR'S OFFICE -

          

      the joyous sounds of the Christmas season RING up from below the window. The doctor applies ointment to a blotch on Tommy's neck, nods his head in to Rosy then leads Tommy to the  door and hands him a candy cane.

          

      AT A SALVATION ARMY POT ON THE SIDEWALK, -

          

      Tommy tugs Rosy to a stop and puts in a donation.

          

      ALONG STORE WINDOWS JAMMED WITH EVERY GOODIE A KID EVER WANTED -

          

      Tommy and Rosy turn and walk through the aisles of an  elaborately decorated department store on their way to see Santa Claus. Rosy checks Tommy's list of presents and sees:

          

      MY DADDY HOME, underlined.

          

      AT SANTA'S THRONE -

          

      Tommy ducks shyly into Rosy's skirt, then reluctantly climbs on Santa's lap as Rosy shoos him on. The glare of a flash bulb blinds Tommy as Santa asks what he wants for Christmas and Tommy  mouths my D - A - D - D - Y.

      OUTSIDE DAVID'S HOUSE - KICKING A TIN CAN -

          

      in a soft drizzle as Christmas lights reflect from the puddles.

          

      IN DAVID'S HOUSE -

          

      MAKING CHRISTMAS COOKIES.

          

      THEN DECORATING THE CHRISTMAS TREE

          

      Tommy picks at the blotch on his neck, slowly climbs the ladder and puts the angel on the top, almost loosing his balance.

          

      TOMMY RUNS TO THE FRONT DOOR IN HIS NIGHT CLOTHES -

          

      throws it open, expecting his father, but it's Manny. Tommy's disappointed expression changes as Manny sets his packages  down, grabs Tommy's face and kisses his forehead.

          

      TOMMY    

      Where's my Daddy?

          

      Manny shrugs an I don't know. Rosy runs to Manny's embrace.

          

      MANNY    

      Rosy.

          

      ROSY    

      Manny. Did things go well?     

      (he nods)

          

      IN HIS ROOM - TOMMY LISTLESSLY PLAYS WITH TOYS -

          

      that once brought pleasure. His movements are slower and he picks at the spot under his sweater.

          

      AT BEDTIME -

          

      Tommy drowses off to sleep with a medical book in his hand.

          

      IN THE MORNING -

          

      Tommy is out cold as Jean and Rosy both try to awaken him.

          

      JEAN    

      Come on Tommy, rise and shine.

          

      ROSY    

      Come on Bambino.     

      It's time for breakfast.

          

      AN AIRPLANE AMONG THE CUMULUS CLOUDS ABOVE THE CARIBBEAN, -

      David stares pensively at the shimmering sea and cloud formations. A few fluffy clouds assume amorphous shapes, blotting out the rest of the sky. A collage forms in the sky, as David reminisces.

          

      A SERIES OF DREAM SHOTS:

          

      ON A JUNGLE ROAD, David's jeep moves rapidly past a collection of peasant houses and enters a clearing in front of -

          

      MARIA'S HOUSE.

          

      David turns off the motor. There is no life other than the relentless CROWING of the rooster.  He walks toward the house, hesitates at the door, knocks, then knocks again.

          

      THE DOOR opens slowly and MARIA'S MOTHER, dressed in black appears. Her face is ageless, chiseled in sorrow.

          

      IN A DREAM-LIKE pantomime, we understand the grief and sorrow.

          

      DAVID takes his helmet off, looks down and speaks.

          

      MARIA'S MOTHER listens without expression, then makes the sign of ヘ

         

      the cross on herself and disappears for a moment.

          

      MARIA APPEARS IN THE DOORWAY, dressed in black and as pregnant ヘ   

      as one can get. DAVID'S look expresses his deep anguish as - MARIA gently puts her and on David's lips to shush him, tears well from her eyes. David hands her an -

          

      AMERICAN VISA and an envelope we can presume is cash.

          

      She disappears for a moment, then returns with the well-worn cowboy hat Joe always wore and hands it to David, who takes it reluctantly. David shakes his head, Maria insists, he turns to go and Maria hugs him impulsively.

          

      IN THE JEEP, David watches the doorway frame the two womens' sorrow, then drives off and the jeep moves into the clouds.

          

      END OF MONTAGE -

          

      - BACK ON THE PLANE:

          

      THE STEWARDESS' HAND AWAKENS DAVID FROM HIS REVERIE.

          

      STEWARDESS    

      Excuse me, Sir. Please fasten     

      your seatbelt. We're about to land.

          

      The stewardess takes his tipping drink as he wipes a tear.

      BENSON O.S.    

      Carson, you are to report immediately    

      to Langley for debriefing and reassignment.

          

      A WET SAN FRANCISCO EVENING AND -     

     

      A PANORAMA OF UNION SQUARE - THE WONDERS OF CHRISTMAS.     

     

          

      DAVID V.O.    

      Benson. Screw you.

          

      FROM A TAXI -

          

      David watches a young boy kicking a can along the street and then motions the cabby to pull over in front of a large store.

          

      THE STORE -

          

      where David, like a recalcitrant Scrooge, loads up with practically all the goodies a boy might want - computer games,  baseballs and footballs, etc. DAVID, really into the spirit of Christmas, AD LIBS - "GOOD TIDINGS," etc. to one and all as well as -

          

      LEAVING VERY GENEROUS TIPS and DONATIONS to every one he sees.

          

      OUTSIDE THE STORE, A SALVATION ARMY WORKER THANKS HIM PROFUSELY.

          

      DAVID    

      And a Merry Christmas to you.     

      (balances his packages)    

      I'm going home.     

      David sees a special set of toy soldiers in the window, loads his packages in the taxi and goes back in.


          

      TAXI DRIVER    

      Hey bub, you're going to get me arrested.

          

      DAVID    

      (to the driver)    

      Don't worry, I'll be right back.     

     

          

      FROM AN OUTSIDE POV

          

      David points and an amused clerk loads boxes.

          

      DAVID'S HOUSE

          

      David juggles the packages as he enters the quiet house.

      DAVID    

      Hello.     

      (pats Smudge, who greets him)    

      Hey! I'm here!     

      Where is everybody?

          

      A NOISE FROM THE KITCHEN --ROSY'S VOICE.

          

      ROSY V.O.     

      Dios mio! David!

          

      DAVID fumbles the packages and they spill all over the hallway as Rosy appears in a flour-covered apron, wiping her hands.   She hurries to David, hugs him with enthusiasm. David hugs her back but frowns.

          

      DAVID    

      Where's Tommy?

          

      Rosy steps back, looks David over.

          

      ROSY    

      Uno momentito, joven.     

      (helping him out of a wet coat)

      I'm so glad to see you.    

      Manny's off on business.    

          

      DAVID     

      (concerned)    

      Where's Tommy?

          

      ROSY    

      Jean took him to the doctor.    

      He'll be back soon.    

      (beat)    

      You need a cup of coffee.

          

      She drags him into the kitchen and past the Christmas cookies -

          

      DAVID    

      (sharply)    

      The doctor? Why? What's wrong?

          

      - then pours the hot coffee and pushes the cup to him.

          

      DAVID    

      How long ago did they leave?

          

      A WIDE AERIAL SHOT OF A HOSPITAL AT NIGHT.   

          

      HOSPITAL CORRIDOR OUTSIDE TOMMY'S ROOM –

          

      where David finishes a conversation with a DOCTOR who shakes his head sadly.

          

      DOCTOR    

      A week or two on the outside.    

      Only a miracle will save him.    

     

          

      TOMMY'S HOSPITAL ROOM,

          

      Tommy sits, propped on pillows, under a beside lamp, and in the dim light he looks mortally ill. On the smoothed-out bedsheets, - ヘ

         

      THE TOY, LEADEN SOLDIERS -

          

      that David bought long ago are lined up in battle positions.  Tommy moves a piece with great difficulty as –

      DAVID KNOCKS SOFTLY, -

          

      and enters. Tommy smiles, and waves feebly.

          

      DAVID    

      Hi kid. How ya' feelin?

          

      TOMMY

      (more slurred than ever)    

      Hi, Daddy. Okay, I guess.

          

      DAVID    

      (studying soldiers)    

      The good guys winning?

          

      TOMMY    

      Which ones are the good guys?

          

      DAVID SITS on the bed as Tommy struggles to place the -

          

      TOY SOLDIERS, ON THE SHEETS.

          

      TOMMY    

      Dad, I.

          

      DAVID    

      Yes, Tom?.

          

      TOMMY    

      I've read all those diagnostic and    

      pathology books. --

          

      A LARGE PILE 0F BOOKS lies on a nearby table.

          

      TOMMY (cont'd.)    

      A guy here, got them for me.    

      The doctors here don't think I     

      know. or understand. but I do.

      TOMMY STOPS PLAYING and looks directly into David's eyes.

          

      TOMMY (cont'd.)    

      . They all think It's some     

      tropical disease you picked up in     

      Central America. and gave me.

          

      DAVID, WORRIED, LOOKS AT HIS INSECT SCARRED HANDS.

          

      TOMMY (cont'd.)    

      They're wrong , Dad.

          

      DAVID    

      They know their business.

      TOMMY    

              -- I know what's wrong with me, Dad.    

      (David is shocked)    

      It's a drug. Mom took some kind of     

      drug, Dad, . before I was born.    

     

      DAVID    

      Tommy, you're guessing.

          

      TOMMY    

      Listen to me, Dad. I know .    

      I'm not blaming you. or Mom.    

      but it's my only chance. I have to

      know what drug it was.

          

      David is defense, but soft to his dying son.

          

      DAVID    

      Tom! Your mother. didn't    

      take drugs. She may not have been    

      the smartest mother in the world, but she     

      didn't take - need - any damned narcotics .

          

      TOMMY

      (calmingly)    

      I didn't say narcotics , Dad.    

      I said some drug.

          

      DAVID'S EXPRESSION FREEZES IN A FLASH OF MEMORY

          

      TOMMY (cont'd.)    

     
    Something you might have taken.

          

      A SPFX, starry night fills the window behind him.

          

      DAVID    

      The green capsules -    

      The weird guy with the finger nail.

          

      TOMMY WATCHES INTENTLY AS DAVID POUNDS HIS FOREHEAD.

          

      DAVID (cont'd.)    

      Your mother, Tommy. Your mother    

      was a model and she was getting older.    

      And like a lot of models she was a     

      patsy for "youth" drugs.    

      (grimacing)    

      . stuff that supposedly gets rid     

      of wrinkles . helps a woman .    

      stay young-looking.

          

      A REVERSE POV, OUTSIDE THE WINDOW as if someone was looking in.

           DAVID V.O.    

      I was on assignment in this Iron    

      Curtain country. Your mother heard    

      there was a wonder drug available     

      that wasn't licensed here.    

      I brought back some -- green capsules --    

      God knows what was really in it.

          

      BACK IN THE ROOM.

          

      DAVID (cont'd)    

      (now extremely distraught)    

      She took them when you were conceived.    

      They were meant for me. Tommy,    

      I killed your mother.

          

      David holds his head again. Tommy, with great courage and his slurring even more pronounced:

      TOMMY    

      Don't blame yourself, Dad.    

      Somebody wanted to kill you and     

      instead they killed mommy.    

      (David, wet eyed, nods)    

      I tried to get her records.    

      But I think they've burned them.

          

      DAVID    

      (husky)    

      I don't know what to do, son.

          

      Tommy tries to pat his dad on the arm.

          

      TOMMY    

      Get me out of here, Dad. We'll find     

      the man. find out what it was.    

      (beat)    

      It's my only chance.    

      (long beat)    

      Can you do it, Dad? Can you and me    

      at least try.

          

      David, now standing, absent-mindedly moves a toy soldier.

          

      DAVID    

      (arms around Tommy)    

      Damned right we can try, Tommy.    

      (to himself)    

      Manny'll help us.    

          

      A WIDE AERIAL VIEW OF THE HOSPITAL, THE LIGHTS EXTINGUISH UNTIL

          

      ONLY TOMMY'S WINDOW IS LIT.    

          

      Below, David enters his car.

          

      DAVID V.O.    

      I'll be back, Tommy.    

          

      TOMMY LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW AT THE SPFX NIGHT, -

          

      one star seems to twinkle a little brighter than the others.

          

      FROM THE REVERSE POV:

          

      THE AERIAL CAMERA FLOATS SLOWLY TOWARDS TOMMY'S WINDOW,

          

      SHERRY'S VOICE with the same ethereal quality of the earlier dream sequence, begins to speak softly and lovingly:

         

     

      SHERRY V.O.

     

               

      "WHEN I WAS SICK AND LAY ABED,

     

      I HAD TWO PILLOWS AT MY HEAD,

     

      AND ALL MY TOYS BESIDE ME LAY

     

      TO KEEP ME HAPPY ALL THE DAY”.

          

      TOMMY'S DARKENED ROOM

          

      Tommy is outlined on the bed with the shadows of toy soldiers scattered among the covers. Sherry's voice is picked up again in the Stevenson Poem.

     

      SHERRY V. O.

     

               

      “AND SOMETIMES FOR AN HOUR OR SO

     

      I WATCHED MY LEADEN SOLDIERS GO,

               

      WITH DIFFERENT UNIFORMS AND DRILLS,

               

      AMONG THE BEDCLOTHES, THROUGH THE HILLS."

     

          

      DAVID'S HOUSE IN SAN FRANCISCO ON THE SAME NIGHT, -

          

      David with Rosy's and Jean's help, tensely and fatalistically finishes packing travel bags. David moves quickly to the bedroom and bundles up the sleeping Tommy and moves rapidly toward the door.

          

      DAVID    

      They're going to be here soon. All    

      of them. Cops. Company goons. ヘ

      everyone.     

      (moving towards door)    

      Make it easy on yourselves,    

      but I'll appreciate all the headstart    

      I can get.    

      (they nod)

          

      ROSY    

      (in the door way)     

      Vaya con dios, big and little amigos.

          

      JEAN    

      Go with god, David.

          

      DAVID     

      (moving out door)    

      Thanks -- both of you.

     


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